Did I dream you last night
or was it you that led me
to the room next door
smoky and dense
thick tongue
rich red
filled my mouth
hot and moist
we fell into eachother
Arms at my sides
too weakened
to hold you
FaintingFlyingFloating away
Drenched in bliss
4 comments:
Chris Lawrence Very sensual and passionate, wonderful.
Michael Frias-may like the shoes in this one
Jack Varnell I am with Michael and Chris- great piece. Dreamlike itself. Imagery is exquisite.-(thx for coming by tonight)
Good one, my friend! it's not just sensual, it's romantic too... It reminds me how I felt when I wrote my 1st book Tale Of The Rock Pieces when I fell in love with a wonderful mermaid... It changed all my life actually, I will never forget it! Thanks for sharing!
Such a beautiful poem...Love it Sam..
You won The Colour of Love poetry competition. Congratulations!
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